In my opinion my greatest effort when it came to drafting as well as revision had to be my project #1 on Soylant. My first draft didn’t even meet the word count. I didn’t really have a topic sentence and a thesis was no where to be found. From there I was able to come to get a complete draft which met the word count. My grade may have not reflected it, but there was a lot of steps I had to take to get where the final draft is.

file:///Users/jacksonmilano/Downloads/Project%20%231%20400%20word%20draft.pdf

file:///Users/jacksonmilano/Downloads/Project%20%231%20Final%20draft.pdf